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This video talks about transitions—why are they important for your essay? What do they do? What are the two major types of transition?

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Transitions, a la Shmoop. You’ve probably spoken to someone at one

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time or another who didn’t use transitions in their speech.

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It likely sounded something like this:

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“I love hot dogs. Do you swim? Flowers are pretty, aren’t they? How many pets do you

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have? I have to go to the bathroom!”[two guys talking in a room]

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Sound like any 5-year-olds you know? [kid coloring on the floor]

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There may actually be some link between all of those thoughts…

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…but the world will never know. Because that guy failed to use “transitions.”

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You can think of transitions as signposts that are scattered through your essay…[signs on a path in the woods]

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…that help your readers navigate the various ideas you introduce.

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They basically help make clear what one thing has to do with another…

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…so your readers don’t get lost.

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Which is a good thing, because they only have enough water to last them a few days. [girl in the desert with a water bottle]

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Your goal is to craft a paper that flows so smoothly…

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…that it isn’t jarring when you go from one paragraph to the next. [hair on an essay getting brushed]

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It should feel more like a steady stream of thought than a…

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…crashing waterfall of thought. There are two major types of transitions:

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Those that transition through words…

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…and those that transition through ideas. Transition words indicate a relationship between

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a couple of ideas. [two Ideas on a date at the theatre]

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So instead of “I was just bitten by a raccoon. I’ve had my shots”…

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…you could say “I was just bitten by a raccoon; however, I’ve had my shots.”

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The sentence doesn’t change much, but it’s much clearer in the second example why you

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switch from talking about rabid woodland creatures to your medical history. [doctor talking to a raccoon]

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You’re establishing a connection between the two.

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Transitions can show contrast… with words like “but,” “however,” “in contrast”

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or “whereas”…

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…they can show similarity… as in “additionally,” “also,” or “similarly”…

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…or they can demonstrate a sequence… “first,” “second,” “next,” “subsequently,”

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or “previously.”

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But you can also transition through ideas. [light bulbs turning on]

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See how we transitioned there?

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To transition through ideas, you can make a reference to a key phrase from earlier in

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your paper to draw a connection.

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And it doesn't have to be an exact repetition of a phrase…

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…it can simply be a restating or further exploration of a topic that was brought up

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previously.

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For example, if you mention in Paragraph 2 that cats and dogs are capable of feeling

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emotion…[panting dog]

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…and then in Paragraph 3 you talk about what a crime it is to abuse animals…

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…you’ve created a transition. By using a common or related words to make

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a connection between two different parts of your paper…

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…you allow your reader to do some thinking for themselves. [brain on a stationary bike]

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After all, readers don’t want everything spoon-fed to them.

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Maybe just a little banana pudding after dinner.

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