Get out the microscope, because we’re going through this poem line-by-line.
Lines 6-7
Now for the first time
I see clearly the trail you planted,
- We're back to those kooky Greek gods and their drama here. Demeter can see where Hades emerged as he came up from the underworld to steal Persephone. He left a trail.
- A trail of what, you ask? The word "planted" would indicate he left some kind of seed.
- Demeter uses lots of "planting" metaphors. After all, she is the goddess of agriculture. It's pretty fitting. (Check out "Symbols, Imagery, Wordplay" for more on that.)
- Could this trail be figurative language for some type of legacy? It's not clear just yet. Let's read on…
Line 8
what ground opened to waste,
- Well, whatever Hades "planted," it didn't grow into anything. Instead, it turned everything to waste. (We guess his green thumb is still pretty black.)
- In other words, on his selfish journey to steal Persephone, he harmed the world… and everyone in it. Way to go, hades.
- Isn't that what happens when we act without thinking? Dove is reminding us that selfish actions have unforeseen repercussions and, well, they aren't very good.
Lines 9-10
though you dreamed a wealth
of flowers.
- Hades didn't literally dream about flowers growing; Dove is using figurative language again. The flowers are a metaphor for good, prosperous thoughts.
- In other words, Hades clearly didn't foresee his actions having any negative consequences—or maybe… he just didn't care.
- Either way, the outcome wasn't as positive as he planned, just like the outcomes of our own selfish actions often are more negative than we considered (sad but true, Shmoopers).