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CAHSEE ELA 3.5 Writing Strategies. What is the most effective way of stating the action in sentence 8?

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Thank you We sneak No And here's your smoke to

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use your brought to you by fleeing elephants Put a

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hurt on a giant hamster wheel and you could power

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the state of new york way Check the following passage

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American animals You're a donkey democrat gates Big all right

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what is the most effective way of stating the action

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in sentence Eight and here the pendulum wait can't get

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started on this one until we review sentencing so we've

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got a scary donkey freaking out zoo animals and the

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whole scene represents democrats beating back the competition Got it

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Now we have to do is take a peek at

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the other options to see if they do a better

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job of getting this basic idea across option b cuts

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out too much information It was some random cartoon about

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a sadistic donkey frightening the other animals It was a

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political cartoon that was commenting on current events oi say

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leaves out the political cartoon part two and it makes

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the problem even worse by being way too wordy First

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part of the sentence give lots of unnecessary details about

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the way the artist went about making the cartoon like

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you really care saying that an artist used his artistic

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talents is redundant repetitive saying the same thing again and

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again and again again and we already know that political

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cartoons consist of drawings in panels that's it this option

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goes out of its way to tell Us a whole

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lot of nothing Kind of like your old uncle who

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dominates thanksgiving with rambling stories that go nowhere and we've

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been there from up do that all day long Answer

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C gets the political cartoon part right but then forgets

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to mention that the donkey is scaring the other animal

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So thanks see for leaving out the best part We're

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looking for the answer that describes the action and there's

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no action here it all nobody's interested in a donkey

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sitting around doing nothing well looks like the best answer

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is e which tells us that the sentence is fine

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as it is this question took us in a big

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fat circle and dropped us off where we started It's

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like there's no place like home right dorothy Even when

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it's filled with scary donkeys they have a queen wine 00:02:16.533 --> [endTime] god

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