Syntax Introduction

Annalise wants to dye her hair red, so she asks her sister to help her use an at-home dye kit. Which of the sentences describing the outcome contains a misplaced modifier?

I. Annalise went to the professional stylist with an at-home dye job gone bad.

II. Vivid Expressions had turned her hair a way-too-vivid shade of purple.

III. The stylist told her to carefully read the instructions that were enclosed in the box with her sister before attempting to dye her hair again.

Which of these sentences contains faulty parallelism?

I. The city is currently hiring for many positions, including librarian, city planner, engineer, and graphic design.

II. If you'd like to apply, go to our website, click the "careers" link, and download an application.

III. You'll be required to input your date of birth, social security number, and list the instances in which you have ever been more than two minutes and 35 seconds late for work.

Which of the following sentences suffers from an inconsistent point of view?

I. Jenna decided not to try out for the tennis team after she found out you have to wear a skirt

II. I always hold my breath when I pass a cemetery because if you don't, you could inhale a spirit!

III. Kids think their parents are strict, but you should realize that they're just looking out for you.

Which of these sentences is in the passive voice?

I. The field mice multiplied rapidly when the farmer left the door to his grain silo open.

II. There were so many that the local supply store ran out of mousetraps.

III. The townspeople decided to fine the farmer and forced all farmers in the area to install automatically shutting doors on their grain silos.

Your class goldfish is missing. Some weirdo stole her and left a ransom note. You're the first one to notice, so you must alert your teacher to the injustice. After you take a few breaths and calm down, what's the best way to break the news?