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ACT English: Passage Drill Drill 1, Problem 14. Checking for redundant or irrelevant information.
ACT English: Passage Drill 1, Problem 8. What would happen if we deleted the underlined sentence?
ACT English: Passage Drill Drill 3, Problem 2. What would the paragraph lose if the writer omits the underlined phrase?
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ACT English: Passage Drill 1, Problem 9. Which is the best spot for the underlined word?
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Here's your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by untouched coconuts. We bet some of them
- 00:08
are in dire need of a hug.
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The best placement for the underlined portion would be... where?
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An untouched coconut has three layers.
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And here are the potential answers:
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The underlined portion consists solely of the adjective "untouched." How do we know
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it's an adjective?
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Because it's doing its best to describe a noun, which is, in this case, "coconut."
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Let's take a stroll though these options and see which one best helps our adjective
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do its job.
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Choice (C) says that the writer should place "untouched" before the word "layers."
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If the writer does this, the sentence would read, "An coconut has three untouched layers."
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Uh... terrible idea. For one, it uses the word "an" where it should use "a,"
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since "coconut" begins with a consonant.
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More importantly, it completely changes the meaning of the sentence. The writer isn't
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describing the layers of the coconut; he or she is telling us about the coconut as a whole.
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Choice (D) would read, "Untouched an coconut has three layers."
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This option has tons of problems. There's the a/an issue from before. Also, "untouched"
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needs a comma after it.
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Ultimately, it's just a wonky way of expressing the thought and is undeserving of further attention.
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Choice (B) suggests placing "untouched" before the word "has." So the sentence
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would read, "The coconut untouched has three layers."
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This option is incorrect, because the adjective is usually placed before the noun it's modifying, not after.
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This means that the original placement was right all along, and the correct answer is (A).
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The sentence should indeed read, "An untouched coconut has three layers."
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Warning: we set booby traps around our coconut trees to ensure that our coconuts remain untouched.
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Proceed at your own risk.
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