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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 1, Problem 1. Properly punctuating dependent clauses.
ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 1, Problem 2. What punctuation do we need between these clauses?
ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 1, Problem 3. Proper word choice for independent clauses.
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In this ACT English drill question, figure out if the underlined section requires a correction or not.
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Here’s your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by taxis. Taxis. TAXIS!!!
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How should you change the underlined portion below, if at all?
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I waited for a taxi, but each one I see was too far away for me to hail.?
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Here are the potential answers...
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Our speaker’s great taxi adventure happened in the past--probably not during the days
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of the dinosaur, but sometime before he or she is speaking.
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We know when the action took place because the verb “waited” is in the simple past tense.
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We also know that the other verb in the sentence needs to be in simple past tense if we’re
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going to clearly communicate the epic past tense story of how this person couldn’t catch a cab.
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Therefore, choice (A) is easy to eliminate because “see” is present tense.
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Unless our speaker has some kind of amazing ability to bend the space-time continuum,
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it doesn’t make sense for the sentence to suddenly shift tenses.
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(D) is incorrect because it sets up a comparison that doesn't exist.
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“Was seeing” is in the past progressive tense, which can be used to show when a longer
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action in the past was interrupted by another past action. In this sentence, the waiting
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isn’t interrupting the seeing.
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The one isn’t happening before the other; they’re happening at the same time… which
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means that the past progressive tense doesn’t work in this sentence.
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(C) doesn’t work either because “had seen” is in the past perfect tense, not the simple past.
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We remember that past perfect is used to describe an action that occurred before another event in the past.
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Since we’ve already established that isn’t the case here, we can send (C) packing.
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Choice (B) lays the correct answer on us by using “saw.”
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This is the simple past version of the verb “see,” so it matches up with the past
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tense verb “waited.”
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Now if the speaker could only flag down a cab all would be right with the world…
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