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CAHSEE ELA 1.1 Writing Strategies. Which of the following sentences, if placed before sentence 1, would be the most effective introductory sentence?
CAHSEE ELA 1.2 Writing Strategies. Which of the following statements is supported by details or evidence from the student's draft?
CAHSEE ELA 1.3 Writing Strategies. What is the best way to combine sentences 10 and 11?
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CAHSEE ELA 1.4 Writing Strategies. Which sentence would provide additional support that fairy tales were not intended to be ideal worlds?
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Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you
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by violent fairy tales Is your kid too well adjusted
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Well try brothers grimm following passage way every stories But
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there were a way to santa claus You hear about
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it L all right here we go Which sentence would
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provide additional support that fairy tales were not intended to
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be ideal worlds and hear the potential answer professor claimed
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children listen locals graphic All right well the name of
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the game here is credibility The best answer is going
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to come from some legit source which helps the author
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hammer the main point home Option b doesn't even come
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close It's not citing any kind of source All we
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have is the author's words that children back in the
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day understood the warnings of fairy tales Now if the
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author brought in children from a time machine in the
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past and then interviewed them will be a different story
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choi see makes the same mistake Is b it's just
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the author telling us that the fairy tales had more
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impact because they were local Well we're not saying that
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the author doesn't know what he or she is talking
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about But we need something a little more substantial than
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just a local On top of that whole issue c
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is extra wrong because the point it makes has nothing
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to do with the reason fairy tales were not intended
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to show nice happy worlds We're looking for solid evidence
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of the dark state of fairy tales before disney came
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along and painted a smile on every fairies face what
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would happen if we put a hard core old school
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fairy in an iron cage match with a sparkly disney
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fairy We shell out for the pay per view Okay
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option d does make a good point The tarantino like
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violence of old fairy tales is pretty solid evidence that
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the stories weren't meant to show what we think of
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now as storybook world This answer has a problem Wei
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have no idea who the person who mentions this point
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is it could be a fairytale expert or it could
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be the author's senile aunt mabel we just don't know
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Well option a fixes the problem by saying that a
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professor is the one presenting the evidence This would be
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a stronger if we knew who the professor is and
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what his or her credentials are If this professor's phd
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was in basket weaving well then his heir opinion on
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fairytales isn't much more valid than aunt mabel Still even
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though answer isn't perfect it's the best we got it's
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kind of like the last deform cupcake in the pan
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might not be perfect but it's Not like we're not 00:02:37.76 --> [endTime] gonna eat it Yeah
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