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ELA Drills, Intermediate: Punctuation and Capitalization 2. Which of the following sentences is incorrectly punctuated?
Transcript
- 00:04
Here's your shmoop du jour brought to you by pauses important in
- 00:08
everyday speech but arguably even more important to video game players who [Boy playing video game]
- 00:11
really really really need to use the bathroom all right which of the
- 00:14
following sentences incorrectly punctuated and here are your potential
- 00:18
answers....we'll give you a hint sometimes commas signal when the [Arrow points to comma in sentence]
Full Transcript
- 00:24
pause in a sentence is supposed to come they're not quite as good at signaling
- 00:28
pauses in traffic, that's why we have crossing guards all right what does
- 00:32
option A have to say for itself well this one signals a pause right before Maria [Hand points to comma]
- 00:36
which is a great place to signal a pause when you're addressing someone
- 00:40
it's a good idea to signal a pause with a comma right before their name
- 00:43
whether you're talking to Maria or Queen of England although it should probably
- 00:46
expect some bowing there too. So A is certainly polite, but not the one we're [Man bows to the Queen of England]
- 00:49
looking for what about B another comma another great place for a pause
- 00:53
probably a lot better than the stroganoff too....
- 00:57
Alright so be is gone what about D well this sentence doesn't have any commas
- 01:00
but it doesn't really need them Franz's cat may have four paws but sentence
- 01:04
doesn't have any pauses, all right what about C well you see one comma before
- 01:09
Hector's address which is excellent so all's well and good with C right? Er not
- 01:13
quite try reading the sentence aloud yourself unless you're on an airplane [Man speaking out loud on an airplane]
- 01:16
then you might annoy the guy sitting next to you without a comma after no,
- 01:20
the sentence is kind of a rushed mess there isn't it well the reason is that
- 01:24
without the comma at the beginning there's nothing to signal to us that we're
- 01:27
supposed to take a quick breather no wonder we're out of breath.. [Man takes deep breath]
- 01:31
We definitely should be pausing there so C's our answer never underestimate the
- 01:34
importance of a good pause especially when you're trying to finish a video
- 01:37
game's final level on expert mode after consuming a full four liters of Mountain [Boy pauses game and runs to the toilet]
- 01:41
Dew
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