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Okay writing shmoop er's just to maurine this section here

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we go students in school that's what we're going to

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analyze here and let's go hunt for it here is

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top of the last paragraph The fact is that most

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students in school who take art classes are not going

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to be professional musicians painters dancers or actors and boy

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is that true So he kind of like rubbing it

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in and they end up working here it's much like

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meat on never end up bitter and angry about it

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either Just mind you i'm just saying well let's fix

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this thing think about it allowed here to be a

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student You must be in school since we're talking about

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students in their natural habitat school the word students it's

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efficient all on its own right Why we have to

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say students in school like soon out of school that

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doesn't make any sense but it's pretty safe to assume

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that students are taking their classes in school saying students

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and in school is redundant repetitive and boy noticed how

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many problems we've had where redundancy is like the enemy

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here So good word to the wise if you think

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about all this the same concepts true for students in

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academic environments that's repetitive while people is technically fine it's

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not specific enough because it could mean people who aren't

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enrolled in school but who happened to be taking art

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classes or some weird thing like that And this sentence

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is specifically about people who are enrolled in school So

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we'll stick with students as our answer Be students in

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school Kids stay in school unless it's really expensive and

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you're going to be a carpenter anyway Then just go 00:01:32.025 --> [endTime] to carpentry school about that

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