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R c writing shmoop er's number sentence for you and

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analyze here let's do it The story would have offended

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many people and the paper did not print it comma

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there so things are not following smoothly here so well

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let's fix him There aren't many things that offend us

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but well censorship is one of them See how many

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books we've shmoop that people sensor crazy and improperly linked

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dependent clause is the other thing that's also offensive We're

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looking for a conjunction to begin the dependent clause here

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and demonstrate a cause and effect relationship So so is

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the best choice See we did there to be so

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the paper d so read the story would have offended

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many people so the paper did not print it See

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then that sound smoother All right loser bowl here well

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and a links the sentence without showing that the first

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claus caused the second which doesn't make grammatical or most

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semantic sense Like how would you say which did not

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printed And although doesn't convey the right kind of relationship

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either So that's it it's So the paper and let's

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sew back together those books that have been censored and 00:01:13.289 --> [endTime] ripped apart Really not cool They're blue haired ladies

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