How we cite our quotes: (Chapter.Paragraph)
Quote #4
Well, I sure did a lot of writing, and you know what? Now that I think about it, it wasn't so bad. (17.2)
How many times have we dreaded doing something and the idea of it just got worse and worse until it seemed as impossible as nailing Jell-O to a tree? Then we finally begin, and we find out it isn't as terrible as we'd built it up to be.
Quote #5
Maybe I'll do what you said and pretend my diary is a letter to somebody. (20.1)
A lot of books (i.e. Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and The Tale of Peter Rabbit) were first told to a particular person before being written down or published for a wider audience. Imagine writing a letter to some random kid someone told you about versus writing a letter to your friend's kid brother. The first would probably be very vague and impersonal, the second specific and detailed. Maybe even fun, depending on how you felt about your friend's kid brother.
Quote #6
One of the tips was listen. I guess you meant to listen and write down the way people talk, sort of like a play. (28.3)
Good dialogue tells a lot about a person and makes a story more interesting for the reader. We can see Leigh's progress as a writer when his diary entries start containing dialogue. It makes that last scene with Mom and Dad even more dramatic because it's like we're right there with them.