Get out the microscope, because we’re going through this poem line-by-line.
Lines 13-16
Her tears fell with the dews at even;
Her tears fell ere the dews were dried;
She could not look on the sweet heaven,
Either at morn or eventide.
- Mariana cries—a lot. She cries in the morning, when the dew is fresh, and she cries at night, when it has dried.
- She's so despondent that she can't think about the sweet things in life. Heartbreak'll do that to ya.
- The speaker really wants to emphasize the woman's tears. Notice how he repeats "Her tears" at the beginning of two consecutive lines? He's using anaphora, a tool that builds the cadence, or musical elements, of a poem.
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Lines 17-20
After the flitting of the bats,
When thickest dark did trance the sky,
She drew her casement-curtain by,
And glanced athwart the glooming flats.
- Some bats fly by—spooky.
- It's very dark, the "thickest" dark. Nice imagery, Tennyson.
- Mariana opens her curtains and looks outside.
- Notice the repetition of a couple sounds in these few lines?
- Yep, Tennyson is using alliteration again. "Dark" and "did" in line 18, "casement" and "curtain" in line 19, and "glanced" and "glooming" in line 20 all repeat initial consonant sounds.
- Keep your eyes peeled for more of this technique, just as our Mariana keeps her eyes peeled for whatever waits in the dark.
Line 21-24
She only said, "The night is dreary,
He cometh not," she said;
She said, "I am aweary, aweary,
I would that I were dead!"
- We get that same refrain here again: "He cometh not."
- This time, Mariana's saying it as she looks out of her curtains.
- And, instead of her "life" being dreary, this time she calls the "night" dreary. Everything else stays the same, though.
- It seems like she is still waiting for whoever is supposed to come. And all the waiting must be getting pretty old.
- Why else would Tennyson keep reminding us of her plight?