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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 5, Problem 4. Which choice uses the proper tense for this sentence?
ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 5, Problem 5. Which choice uses the correct form of "awake" for this sentence?
In this ACT English drill question, figure out if the underlined segment requires a correction or not.
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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 2, Problem 5. Which punctuation marks best complete the sentence?
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Here's your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by lawyers. So, you might want to check the
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fine print before you sign.
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How should you change the underlined portion below, if at all?
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There is not much difference between entering law school and jumping into a pit of rattlesnakes,
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in fact, you might prefer the snake pit.
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There's definitely more than one snake in this pit.
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The phrase, "in fact," is coiled in the middle of this sentence, evilly plotting to throw
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us off the trail.
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See, "in fact" can sometimes function as a subordinating phrase.
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If it were doing so here, it would turn the independent clause, "you might prefer the
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snake pit" into a dependent one, meaning that the phrase would then not be able to exist
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on its own anymore.
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However, that's not what "in fact" is doing here at all. Besides acting as a subordinating
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phrase, it can also sometimes act as an introductory phrase.
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It does this here by setting the stage for "you might prefer the snake pit."
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Therefore, we know that both of our clauses here are independent, and the comma that attempts
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to connect them in the original sentence is guilty of creating a comma splice.
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Which means we can get rid of choice (A) and move on with our lives.
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Let's see what choice (C) has to offer.
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Well, it does do a good job of connecting our independent clauses with a semicolon.
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However, it messes up by not placing a comma after the introductory phrase, "in fact."
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It's crucial, for clarity's sake, that a comma always follows any introductory phrase.
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We can nix choice (D) pretty easily. While it does remember to put that crucial comma
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after our introductory phrase, "in fact," it tries to connect our two independent clauses
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with a colon.
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Colons can connect independent clauses, but only when the second clause is an explanation.
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Here, the second clause is more of a clarification, really, so the colon doesn't work.
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We've now narrowed it down to choice (B), which comes through with flying colors.
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It remembers that crucial comma after our introductory phrase, and also correctly divides
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our independent clauses with a period.
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For the record, we at Shmoop will take a metaphorical snake pit over a real one any day...
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