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CAHSEE ELA 1.1 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 1.2 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 1.3 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
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CAHSEE ELA 3.2 Writing Conventions. Which answer best fills in the blank?
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Sorry And here's your shmoop dooz your brought to you
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by twins Who is scooby doo's evil twin you casted
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scooby Don't all right which answer best fills in the
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blank right here Cindy and cynthia are twins Blank Always
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get mistaken for each other all right near the potential
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answers that which they do All right we're going to
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assume that cindy and cynthia are humans even though those
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might be good names for our new pet hamster Since
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we're talking about people here we can't use the word
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that because it's only used when we're talking about things
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And while we're at it we'll next option b is
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well which is also used to refer just teo things
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Option c tells us we ought to use the pronoun
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they but we can't agree it's true that they can
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be used to refer to people but if we put
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it in a blank while we'll end up with a
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run on sentence run ins happen when two independent clauses
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are crammed together without a conjunction or the right punctuation
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Like in this case cindy and cynthia are twins and
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they always get mistaken for each other These two things
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right here have their own subjects and merv's making them
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independent clauses So we need either a semi colon or
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akama followed by a conjunction to make this option grammatically
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correct Well option c doesn't give us any of this
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so it's plain wrong joyce d is the best answer
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by far unlike that or which who is used to
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refer to people and unlike the pronoun they who helps
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us avoid a run on being a relative pronoun instead
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of trying to start its own independent klaus who uses
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its relative pronoun powers to turn the final phrase into
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a dependent clause that describes the twins and we all
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know how much sinning cynthia like being described Say what
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