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CAHSEE ELA 1.1 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 1.2 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 1.3 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 4.2 Writing Conventions 185 Views
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CAHSEE ELA 4.2 Writing Conventions. How would you correct this sentence, if at all?
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Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you
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by marketing our figures say this one's gonna sell which
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answer best fills in the blanks Angeline works in marketing
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setting up displays ordering products and trains new staff And
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here the potential answers way have here is a problem
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with parallel structure a rule that tells us to use
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the same pattern of words throughout a sins It's good
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rule because that makes sure things sound equally important and
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generally helps us avoid wonky lopsidedness The trouble with this
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particular sense is that the list starts out with a
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jared that's that i n g thing setting up displays
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Then it goes on to another jerry and ordering products
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and then it randomly ends with trains new staff which
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isn't a jared at all Where is the i n
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g baby Even if we've never heard of a jared
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which is a verbal construction that functions is a noun
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It's easy to find the wonky nous that's upsetting the
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parallel structure here It just feels weird to have only
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one verb in the sentence without an i n g
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ending Now all we have to do is look for
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the answer that has an i n g ending for
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been list Well we've already established that the original sense
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is wrong So there goes choice d they can go
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to because it uses sets and trains and randomly throws
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ordering in the middle You're probably way ahead of us
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at this point But while we're at it let's also
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cross off c starting the list with setting and then
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continuing it with quarters and trains upsets the parallel structure
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on believe us when we say that bad things happen
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when parallel structure gets upset not pretty Option b is
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the only one that keeps its structure parallel List is
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full of nothing but i n g verbs as faras
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the eye can see way prefer crystal blue ocean disappearing 00:01:47.738 --> [endTime] into the writhe
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