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PSAT 1.16 Writing Diagnostic. How would you change the underlined portion of the passage, if at all?
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PSAT 1.1 Reading Diagnostic. The main purpose of the first two paragraphs is to...what?
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Thank you We sneak and here's your smoked You sure
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brought to you by backup captains because you never know
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when something awful is gonna happen And it's nice to
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have another one on deck Checking the following passage their
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cabinet Can somebody find captains aren't like married of course
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And i think of in this snark snark key words
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here people If you see keywords sticking out anything ringgold
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isles the tv weather is how we skin a lot
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of references Snark hoovers paygo pang go some nice twice
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on university in australia femur captain willie the main purpose
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of the first two paragraphs is tio what And hear
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the potential answers Contact green humor All right so we've
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got a super long passage about some captain on a
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ship He doesn't say anything about having a peg leg
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so we probably don't have to worry about looking out
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for any monstrous white whales or pushy peg leg salesman
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For now we only have to zero in on the
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first two paragraphs per question We're tasked with figuring out
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what the main purposes of the segment of the passage
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so let's rummage through our options to see what turns
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up is the main purpose be show the range of
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characters that the author meets in his travels Well he
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does talk about a few characters but he's clearly not
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telling us about him just because he thinks they might
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make interesting additions to the novel were writing in other
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words he's less interested in these people themselves then and
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how their ineptitude has affected him What about c Is
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he using a humorous anecdote toe lighten up another wise
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serious subject I'm serious subject Would that be And as
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far as we can tell you no one's grandma died
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recently This captain fellow doesn't strike us as the sort
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who would feel the need to lighten the mood anyway
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So we're gonna go ahead and cross out See he
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is he explaining the varieties of navigational methods available at
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the time No sir The only time he mentions navigators
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is to talk about how those he's encountered probably couldn't
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find their own feet in the dark sixty That leaves
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only a the main purpose of the first two paragraphs
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Isa provide context for how the author found himself navigating
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the snark it's also to do a bit of griping
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Apparently But when it comes down to it are Narrator
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is explaining to us how he came to be the
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captain of the snark after a parade of dimwits failed
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miserably before him Oh yeah is our answer as in
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ii captain that's What The captain wants to be surrounded 00:02:25.215 --> [endTime] by ii
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