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Okay S eighty writing shmoop er's We're getting you all

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trained up to become an editor at schmuck you know

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but that's what you really dream of doing when you

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were a little Ok Well here we go We got

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eleven more of these things and a whole big megillah

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here that we're going to read about Well rounded curriculum

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I think you're going to be talking about reasonable conditions

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What do you think president decided to leave lincoln relegate

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percent and percent per decade Our dedication And that was

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enough to last a lifetime If i can only between

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israel times economically publications like what we're going for something

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a little side bet going on about getting really really

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wanted me back I don't know everything My father is

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a good thing that my father was a nickel back

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T o your insight Okay well wow That's ah politically

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charged statement here So let's See where we go with

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it First question to make the paragraph flow most smoothly

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Where should sentence one be placed All right well think

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about this so sentence ones go back right here It

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is the making of connections through a rich arts inclusive

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curriculum that ultimately empowers a student to develop convictions and

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reach their full academic and social potential So let's think

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about this since one is more of a concluding sentence

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than an introductory one right Putting the sentence last follows

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the forward momentum of the paragraph ten sparrow graph begins

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with a question gives a wrong answer was probably bad

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grammar and then offers a right answer since one elaborate

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on that right answer and makes a claim that builds

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off of the three proceeding senses So probably ought to

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go with the end like right here right Unless we're

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playing jeopardy It's tough to answer a question before the

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question has even been asked with sentence one where it

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is now That's exactly what's happening And you know i

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have an aunt who does that always in thanksgiving All

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right well if sentence one came after sentenced to let

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it sort of kind of makes sense Maybe since it's

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answering the question but it would throw off sentence three

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there Who's yet is meant to directly follow sentenced to

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thereby creating a contrast you have to remember when you're

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answering these kind of questions you can't change any words

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subsequently or linkages or whatever All you can do is

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cut and paste the sentence they're talking about You can't

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do any carpentry around the edges We'll put in sentence

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one before sentencing Four might confuse the reader by making

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her think that the rich curriculum is the math science

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and reading mentioned in sentence Three like all the things

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that you you know actually could do to get a

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job and pay your rent in the real world So

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that's it Er the answer is d after sentence for 00:02:34.343 --> [endTime] we're done

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