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Texas EOC English I: Understanding and Analysis of Literary Texts Drill 3, Problem 2
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Sorry Then here's your shmoop du jour brought to you
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by brush strokes You know like when a paintbrush goes
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for a swim restaurant fresh that ryan locked we've got
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all right Check the following passage All right lisa's artie
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german of the reputation line class painting and were skimming
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quickly Here we've seen that's a kazillion rocco on a
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style launch grid pattern from something relevant All right here
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we go What changes need to be made descends eleven
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and hear the potential answers All right So let's take
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another look at sense Eleven jackson pollock's paint spattered canvas
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is didn't really have a subject while rothko's subjects were
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simple Squares are cool let's roll like that option a
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doesn't have it figured out He leases right to use
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an apostrophe s this makes pollock possessive which is what's
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called for here He's the one who owns the paint
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spattered canvas is right On the other hand adding an
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s by itself makes public plural As far as we
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know there was only one jackson pollock and not a
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herd of polyp clones Although that become cool Well option
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b is no good either Lisa's right to connect paint
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and spattered with a hyphen Their powers combined These two
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words become a single adjective that describes pollock's paintings Take
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my life in a way and we suddenly have a
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sentence with an extra noun and verb that throw everything
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well out of whack Of course in the world of
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pollen gotta whack Maybe a relative term but that's separate
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story We'll have to say no to choice Cia's Well
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the com attacks on the clause about rothko's work without
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it The claws like tio Fall off They're like a
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cliff Well maybe not but the sentence would be harder
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to understand So hey looks like at least got this
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one right The correct answer is deep The original sentences
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just fine as it is congrats released This calls for
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a cell is shmoop shin shmoop You know we're gone 00:02:05.15 --> [endTime] like when a paintbrush goes for a swim
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