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PSAT 1.10 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
PSAT 1.11 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
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PSAT 1.10 Writing Diagnostic. How would you change the below underlined portion of the passage, if at all?
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more great name struck cancer All right How would you
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change the bolo underlying portion of the passage if it
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all being that's it That one word All right near
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the potential answers is was are you in nineteen forty
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three The existential philosopher jean paul sartre wrote a book
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called being and nothingness You ever read it Because what's
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the point of it really For this question we're faced
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with only one of the two notions in that title
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being thank goodness because it's way easier to conceptualize that
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nothingness We're still trying to wrap our heads around the
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idea of something this but oh that's separate story So
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in the passage is it right for us to use
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the word being Or are we better off using is
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wass or are as suggested by the answer choices Well
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what we have on our hands here people is a
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tense issue which would explain why no one in the
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room who's making eye contact Paragraph is word appears in
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is written in the present tense There's an is here
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The word lies there all present tense So to keep
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consistent and have this word jive with everything else it
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also needs to be in the present tense while being
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doesn't quite fit The bill it's in what's called the
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present progressive tense which while it has the word present
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in there is something quite different See wass is in
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the past tense so that one's definitely out and e
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r is a plural herb which ain't gonna work The
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subject here is different which is singular So it needs
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a singular verb It can ride off into the sunset
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with the only viable option And his b is once
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we plug that in it reads science lies three degrees
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thirty minutes east of the meridian of alexander agha And
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the difference of latitude between alexandria and science is seven
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degrees five minutes rather than seven degrees twelve minutes The
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number veritas anees had calculated present tense singular sounds lovely
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Perfect Our work here is done as young paul shots
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Would say Who cares what he would say We're all 00:02:19.36 --> [endTime] going to die someday regardless
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