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PSAT 1.10 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
PSAT 1.11 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
PSAT 1.12 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
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PSAT 1.7 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion below, if at all?
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Thank you We sneak and here's your shmoop du jour
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brought to you by lunar flights They're always cheaper if
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you order him through orbits Check the following passage Demand
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for learning walk in space tournament given white eleventh sexton
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hello program All right how would you change the underlined
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portion below if it all to take a variety of
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measurements and hear the potential answers Right Well a variety
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of measurements huh Maybe this sexting thing is going to
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measure an astronaut's wait Or maybe it'll be used to
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measure the speed of the shuttle Or perhaps the astronauts
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are going to be making beef wellington on board their
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craft and want to measure out two tablespoons of extra
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virgin olive oil You know that seems a little non
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specific for our taste so we're going to nick's option
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a and assume there is a better choice Does see
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have it right Will it be used for several activities
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related to their position Well looks like we're taking another
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ride on board The vague mobile several activities ping pong
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cross stitch planking Well again this could be referring to
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anything So if we're looking for a way to finish
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this sentence by adding a bit more specificity well this
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is not the way to go about it So but
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by option c d suggest that we should just delete
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the underlying portion altogether But uh don't make this passage
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less detail not more detailed which is what we're looking
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for though instead of deleting the underlying portion we're going
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to delete option d how's that for taste your own
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medicine there buddy The correct answer is b The investigation
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used a sextant to measure their spaceships position using the
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stars even if we don't know what a sex it
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is And it sounds like something we shouldn't know about
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For atleast sixteen waken use context clues to conclude that
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this is probably right on the money It makes sense
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and it adds details So yeah he's the one we
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want now to grab a bite of that beef wellington
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the only tricky part getting it to stay on our 00:01:55.745 --> [endTime] plate while we're in zero gravity
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