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TSI Writing: Revising a Text to Remove Author's Bias 3 Views


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Which of the following revisions omits the author's bias from sentence 10?


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All right yes i reading bumpers next up in our

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fast food high schools wrestling match questions We'll just jump

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right into it and skipping the text later In context

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which of the following revisions omits the author's bias from

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sentenced tend right Since ten was right there I'm all

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for the coming partnerships so he's saying i'm i'm for

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the murder of mick high school right So which of

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these omits the bias We want something neutral so a

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is clearly not coming partnership are really smart partner to

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run around The only way to go way try would

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offer students many benefits Okay we'll see is pretty neutral

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relatively there we would be turning down a great opportunity

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for you all right Those are all political statements there

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other than si well this is something we all have

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most of shmoop family are particularly bias toward shiny objects

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and baked goods with chocolate price isn't something that should

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necessarily be broadcast loudly in an essay though a little

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implied bias goes a long way as it is less

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likely to alienate readers Read the new york times the

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wall street journal and you get a grip there a

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statement such as i'm all for it can be revised

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into a statement that supports the claim such as well

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it offers many benefits Yeah this is an objective fact

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without the color of any bias so see it is

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and loser bull you know all the rest of these

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air clearly biased statements you'd expect to read them in

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a you know in a newspaper similar so that's it 00:01:35.466 --> [endTime] we're done we're shmoop chrissy

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