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Okay sy writing shmoop er's moving on down the line

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here let's Just get right to it in context which

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is the best way to revise sentence twelve This thing

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right here it's the beginning of paragraph four Big impacts

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of stress on daily life are often unique to each

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individual as these tend to show up in our weaker

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areas Point Okay yeah it's not a great sentences Well

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let's think about this dress is a killer Nobody likes

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it and everyone tries to find ways to get rid

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of it or at least negative stressed essay makes an

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interesting point by saying that stress shows up in our

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areas of weakness like it weighs on us Yeah while

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the weak spot in this ends is casual language instead

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of saying something in formal like show up we need

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a word that's more formal in order to match the

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language used in the rest of the essay So manifest

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is the best option here right So the impact of

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stress on daily life are often unique to each individual

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as these ten to manifest in our weaker areas probably

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really should've been manifest themselves or something like that But

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well we're not even counting that so Loser bowl here

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the opposite of manifest is obscure which means to block

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something from view and pulverize means to crush into dust

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That's not gonna work We're not too keen on our

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weak areas here being pulverized classify well means toe name

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and assign a category which is not samos show up

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so that's it it's a and remember even when these

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aren't perfect like this one is not You picked the

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best one there and the least bad one And just 00:01:36.928 --> [endTime] go with it So that it's a word

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