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All right sy writing jumpers four of five here in

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this section Previously you said ruins altering the maintained because

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i stayed in my email visiting north germany and job

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has been with them and dominate them A one ton

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of been like in context which is the best location

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for sentence Nine All right Sentenced nine hour vet diagnosed

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him with borda tele or kennel cough So where should

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that go What We really hate it when things don't

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make sense how are we supposed to be sensible about

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the insensible right Too many times writers think what's in

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their brain is what actually came out on paper but

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this is not always the case People We need to

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know the cause of the coughing before we learn about

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the effect so place this sentence after ten we're hunter

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then begins to cough and sneeze violently right So the

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right answer is b after ten it doesn't make sense

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to tell us he was diagnosed with kennel cough before

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he was even adopted so we can get rid of

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a the rest of the letter discusses miss mona sykes

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attempt to get money back from the shelter so placing

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the diagnosis of hundred coffin the third paragraph wouldn't make

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up a lot of sense like you see your d

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would have you do right so that's it The answer

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is b and uh yeah i think we're getting shmoop 00:01:28.235 --> [endTime] cough from doing too many of these audios

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