ShmoopTube

00:00

Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop du

00:05

jour brought to you by lead poisoning Yet another reason

00:09

to avoid pencil and paint chips too Well chief elected

00:13

Not good for you All right We're skimming We're really

00:17

focused on selina Yeah he's this really hot singer Maybe

00:22

different one of its passage Just skip right onto the

00:25

question Which of these sentences could be added after sentence

00:29

twenty four to improve the conclusion and hear the potential

00:34

answers All right Well to figure out the best way

00:37

to end this paper will take another look at the

00:39

final paragraph So right here people must realize that all

00:42

their trash goes somewhere when it's thrown out it's especially

00:45

important to remember that electronic parts don't just his peer

00:48

they leave a dangerous and lasting impression with some effort

00:50

computer recycling can become his common and accepted as other

00:53

types of recycling So this paragraph basically restates the importance

00:57

of being aware of the dangers of dumping old computers

01:01

And it ends by suggesting that people make an effort

01:04

while the problem could be fixed We're thinking selina's final

01:06

sentence ought to feed on this last idea right She

01:10

needs some kind of called arms that encourages the reader

01:13

to get involved in recycling old computers Well choice eh

01:17

is not really what we have in mind It might

01:19

be true that it takes a long time for recycling

01:21

to become a standard public service but this sentence doesn't

01:25

feed on the last paragraphs Ideas and it's definitely not

01:27

a rallying cry If selena tried to launch a recycling

01:32

revolution with this well her movement would be a little

01:34

lackluster choice Cnd are more in line with what we're

01:39

looking for but their tone just doesn't jive with the

01:41

rest of the paper See gets a little too demanding

01:44

when it says everyone must While d gets a little

01:48

too personal with your local agency selina has to remember

01:52

that being too demanding or two personal can be both

01:55

annoying and or creepy Option b is the best answer

01:59

It gives selina the rallying cry she needs while sticking

02:02

with the tone of the rest of the paper We're

02:06

thinking about starting a movement to shut down restaurants that

02:08

serve pencil and paint chips D'oh that madness has to 00:02:13.188 --> [endTime] stop

Full Transcript