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jour brought to you by voting rights If you don't

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use them you'll lose him All right check the following

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passage Felons felons disenfranchise It's Political left leaning right I

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figured Okay what should jordan do with sentences nine and

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ten to improve the papers organization and hear the potential

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answers I'm here well what to do with sentences nine

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and ten Let's take a look at him first Right

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here A few states have extended voting rights to prisoners

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However several more permanently disenfranchise felons Well the main issue

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here is that a two second paragraph is generally a

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bad idea It's on a total No No But we

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need a good reason to do such a thing And

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is there a good reason here No no there is

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not Well Choiceseat is nothing to fix the problem If

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anything combining the two senses it make it just worse

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Having one lonely sentence isolated from the rest of the

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paragraph for no good reason would make it even well

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Let's sense and let's face it even for a sentence

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It's sad to be alone On the other hand choice

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d is a little drastic Chill out d you're overdoing

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it a bit way shouldn't cut these sentences completely out

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of the essays they do contain some solid information That's

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pertinent to what's going on answer b doesn't work Either

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simply because it's a little random sentence is nine and

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ten just don't logically fit into the flow of things

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this late in the paper While choice a nails it

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These two senses are a continuation of the proceeding topic

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So there's No reason We can't unite him with the

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previous paragraph It's like returning a lost puppy but with 00:01:49.84 --> [endTime] words Just look at them together

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