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Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop dooz

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your brought to you by disenfranchisement like when an unworthy

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mcdonald's franchises stripped of its arches are checking falling passage

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I'm joining voice of s a felon's disenfranchised using a

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right boat Officially on my own All americans think closet

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Great Any solution Interesting opinion Well jordan does not think

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he worded his thesis Very well How can he wrote

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vise sentence for to make it clearer sense for back

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and hear the potential answers Justice Justice Yes yes No

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doubt about it Since for needs some help it should

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be corrected because it is an injustice It could definitely

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get his point across in a simpler way Option a

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isn't the way to fix things though it looks simple

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All right but this sentence is unclear At first glance

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it is an injustice to correct Correct oh the injustice

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itself needs to be corrected See that's like too long

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Figure out we're not getting any younger here Joyce c

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doesn't work because it's too passive If jordan wants to

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stop the disenfranchisement of convicted felons he needs to be

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more active than this Come on jordan Let's see some

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hustle out there Option d isn't right either The statement

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is just too general This paper is about one specific

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injustice We can't go around solving every problem in the

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world at the same time because boston option is the

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way to go This choice makes it clear that disenfranchisement

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is the specific injustice that jordan wants to correct except

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for jordan is bringing to justice Whoever keep stealing everybody's

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lunch from the fridge way won't keep it fight anymore

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