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Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour Brought to you

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by dangerously funny comedians You might need riot gear for

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this one All right Chicken following passage The need for

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strict laws against animal cruelty against people before no peter

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thank you All right what change if any should be

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made in sentence Three And here the potential answers All

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right This one simple if we spot the issue right

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off the bat So here we go A person who

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intentionally hurts an animal shows a lack of empathy and

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a tendency toward aggression and violence and these air traits

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that can carry over into the way in which that

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person treats other people Well even if we don't spot

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the issue right off the bat the process of elimination

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is always there to lend a helping hand like that

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All right is easy to eliminate the word these is

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clearly what we need to refer to the bad trades

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of animal abusers The word them doesn't make any sense

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at all and them are traits that can carry over

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huh Speak english No ditto for b we need the

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singular verb shows to go along with the singular noun

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person show is plural so doesn't work there A person

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shows people show don't go thinking these singular verbs of

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plural just because they haven't s on the end ver

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bland is a topsy turvy world compared to the land

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of now nhs Finally we can eliminate d because well

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come on we all see that there's problem here Right

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option C well sure does change Tendency to tendency Looks

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like john didn't bother to use spellcheck because tendency should

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be spelled with an e instead of an a let's

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Just be a lesson to you john Never doubt the 00:01:46.278 --> [endTime] power of the red squiggly

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